Adults Corner

So, I’ve been thinking for awhile about this and can’t seem to talk myself out of it, so I figure I may as well give in and let live.

So here’s a new feature to my little blog, though it will be no less than a fortnight posting (on the opposite as ‘In Motion’) and will be of various scenes from various things that I have written.

Saying this I have the first four or so covered.

Now, let’s get into what I’m going to be putting up here.

Let’s explain.

I really need opinions about my writing abilities and what I can and can’t do. More so where shit should land (like would my scene work in a flat out romance or should I push it that little bit harder and get into erotica instead?).

But I need insights into what I can and can’t do. If it’s worth reading? Can you get into the scene, even if you don’t read the whole show? Am I any good as writing what I want you all to see?

There the biggest things that roll around my head and I want to understand what I’m doing wrong. If I’m not. What you like and don’t like about my writing.

And to make this interesting, well, why not throw you sex scenes.

Who doesn’t like a good fucking to pick up the heart rate?

So that’s what this is all about.

Simple aye? Yeah, that’s why I haven’t been able to get it out of my head. But it takes some balls for a person who’s shit at grammar; really, it’s why the short story a month never worked full time. It’s shit scary. But I want to get published and what better way to get myself there, and maybe even be more than a one hit wonder, then by getting your input—the readers input—into the things I want you to read?!

So don’t be shy, but don’t be cruel for the hell of it.  I really want to be able to write something that you will want to read and I feel the best way for that is to get this out there and hope you’ll share what you thought!