First, they edited about a chapter of my first book,
got me to fix up what they found, and then I ended up with a different editor
who fix up a few other things but then continued on with the rest of my story.
The first story was around 12k and it wasn’t
chaptered out.
If I remember correctly—no, I’ll look it up. This
one ended up going through four editing sweeps before it got sent up the line …
(I’m not sure what comes next, I haven’t gotten that
far yet—remember four months, and I’m pretty sure, or I’m thinking, I’m
probably not going to be published till next year, with Christmas come up and
everything, but I’m not sure. I haven’t been told either way. and I’m not sure
if it’s the fact that I’m not that worried, that I know it will happen and no
matter what I say it’s not going to happen any quicker, just piss off Jay.
Or if I’m too scared to ask, because that will mean
it’s real. That it’s moving and I’m going to actually know when I’m published
and that it will become more real, something more to worry about.
But really this is for another time)
… The first time that I noticed was track change. I’m
not sure if it’s something I’m meant to talk about or not, I’ll guess if I get
in trouble well all find out. But track change is confusing, because it’s all
there. To me, it took until recently to really understand what I was looking
at. It keeps everything, what it’s been changed into, what’s going to change
and it’s… confusing.
The second was how much it annoyed me when I saw the
comments. My defensiveness, from my school days, the one that I thought I’d
gotten myself over, flared up and bit me in the arse.
I started it out. Spent a few hours getting annoyed.
With myself, with the editor, with the fact that I didn’t understand what the
fuck they weren’t understanding about the words I’d written.
You see, with me, because I come from a different country
we had a fun little time with what I called things. It’s not big, Australia is
much more Americanised then I think I’d like to admit, and because I understood
that my audience will be mostly American’s I tried my best to stay true to
myself and my country without going to bogan—which is hard when my characters
are that.
Anyway, the most confusing on was when we came up to
my use of ‘Bikies’ the editor didn’t understand what this meant—I think—and I
was looking at it like, ‘what do you mean, it’s a bikie, I’m not actually sure
how to make that more obvious’
‘am I meant to say a name, like the Commoncharos (probably
spelt wrong), or—okay, so at this present moment, that’s the only one I
remember.
It took me a shower, washed dishes, and a few hours
of thinking before I realised it wasn’t that bikies was confusing to the
editor, it was the fact that as an Aussie we shorten anything we possibly can,
and what I needed to do was call them what they actually where Motorcycle Gang.
With a day break between when I started and when I
went back, and a talk with my sister, I managed to get over myself.
It wasn’t the fact that I felt these things didn’t
need changing, or that they were changing too much. I had the right thoughts
inside my head; I knew it would be a better story this way. and if I truly think
about it, there wasn’t all that much that was changed.
A few paragraphs that needed to be reworded a little
more than what an editor could do because if they tried they’d change the whole
tone of my voice.
And I’m told my voice is quite strong. Which is a
reason that my mum wouldn’t touch my work she’d want to change it, she’d want
to prefect it, and I don’t write like a... I don’t know, but I write like you
speak, even when it’s in your head.
Now, that first books editing seem to have the most
changed.
At first I thought, the reason that they, changed so
much with that first book, and hadn’t with the others, was because I wrote the
first one in ’11 and as I wrote the rest I became a better writer.
I believed this for a long time (which is saying,
like, maybe 3 months). Which is kinda arrogant of me, I feel.
Yeah, in a way I probably did become a better writer
in that time. but not as much as my head was letting me thing I was.
When I got myself a beta, she was telling me about
my story. About how she started reading it and she saw the way it was written
and how it should actually be. The proper way it was meant to be put. And this
was after the editing.
She said that even though she was engrossed in the
story she still had parts where she would think “I’d have put it this way? Or
that way?”
She said that it wasn’t until halfway through the
books that she realised that it was my style of writing that it wasn’t proper
but more how they would have said it, thought it—the character that it.
She even went to tell me that when she was done she
was tempted to re-read it because the start would be different now that she
understood how I was writing it and that it would be better that way.
So word of advice, loss yourself in my books, forget
what you know about grammar and sentence structure, ‘cause I don’t know shit
about then.
So know, I have two thoughts on why my editing is so
simple. That there’s hardly a change in them. and I’m saying this coming off my
fourth book editing. When I went through it I found a lot of sentence mistakes
that I changed, and they didn’t.
Maybe it was because I just didn’t like who it was originally,
and that’s why… I don’t know… shit.
Anyway, 1) there being lazy about it. Like, they don’t
like my stories and can’t be bothered with it.
This point is that evil diseased part of my brain. Because
why would that matter. They chose to edit my series, so that much mean they saw
that they could do it. And that they wanted to, right?
And more so, who would that help?
They do a shit job at editing, and that ends up
being the reason people don’t like my stories then its all on them. It’s their fault,
which has nothing to do with me.
And more so, well, even though it’s editing, and
maybe people forget that there’s a person there, but shouldn’t you feel some
pride in what you’re doing, and if not quit, you’re not helping anyone by
hating it.
And, the real reason, or the one my brain is
actually likening better, so 2) that they are used to my writing style and they
understand it. They understand me, and they realise that other will when they
get to that book. They realise that they don’t need to change it.
That, and I probably have become a little better and
writing a novel, like I said, the first book came out in 11 and I don’t think I
finished the second one until mid ‘12.
Anyway, who cares, what you need to know is that I
fought with myself and I’ve managed to have a lot more fun with my editing part
of my stories.
I know that a lot of people don’t, but these things
need to be fixed, for many reason, and who are you to think that they don’t.
I also have the add points for a slightly different culture,
and that my country isn’t going to get me all that much money in this books
world, mostly because we have a fraction of the amount of people on our country
than most of the world, and if I want to get big I need in the USA market,
which means you guys need to be able to understand me.
But, still, editing can be frustrating, especially when
you look at a line that they have marked as illegible, and you look at it, and
understand it completely and you’re not sure what the hell there seeing that
you aren’t.
So you have to sit there, in your bubble and wonder
what the hell you’re meant to do to make it all make sense when it already does.
Anyway, these two post have been long, and I’m
hoping from now on they won’t be, seeing as I think I’m up to where I’m up to,
and there isn’t really all that much to say until I get to the next level in my
books.
So, till next time…
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